Very interesting.
Im already thinking how cool this story could become later on. Its already intruiging right now, but i can feel many exciting or tense times in future chapters. This also seems quite professionally done in terms of its story, so far in my opinion i would say this could pass as a well known writers introduction! Here is my review.
The graphics were very good. Truthfully i cant really pick out what it is exactly but theres something that took away from them slightly, which is why i gave a 9. The colours usually fit in well, but they didnt necessarily stand out. The characters' appearances were all pretty good, i liked how no one character looked similar to another. I noticed there was a lot of detail in the backgrounds, it shows you put a lot of effort into them. The effects you used such as shading and the rain really helped out in this case. The style was great, and it will only get better as the story progresses. Maybe for the introduction episodes there was just a little too much narration and not quite enough actual movements in the animation. This method was still used well to get the story across nicely. Im hoping in the next episode there is some dialogue between the characters and a little bit more animation, but see if you can keep some of the narration in. The sound was great too, there werent many sound effects, i personally dont recall any. But since the style of these first two movies have been mostly narration that didnt matter too much. The narrator's voice was good and same with the music playing in the background throughout.
So overall this was a very good submission and i just cant wait to see what comes of this series. Please keep the quality of each chapter high!
-Two Thumbs Way Up! 4.5/5